（三）說明文及范文點評 說明文是就某一件事說明清楚，一般總是以空間順序展開的，可以自上而下，自左而右，從里到外，從整體到局部等等。寫物的文章常用某處有某物的句子表示物的存在。 常用的句型如： There be... I have got a/an... It is-red/green/colour/round... I likebest. It looks like... I like it very much. I will keep it for ever. 范文1 Our Language Lab There is a language lab in our school. Its on the third floor. Its big and clean. There are 50 desks and 50 chairs in it. There are 50 computers and a control desk（操縱臺）in it. There are50 headphones（耳機）on the desk. Every week we have our English lessons here. We watch slides, TV, video and listen to tapes. Then the teacher asks us questions. We like our language lab and always keep it clean and tidy. 點評：這篇文章寫了我們的語音室，按照一定的空間順序，先寫設備，再寫功能，讓人對語音室的概貌有一個全面，準確的了解。 范文2 Our Housing Estate There are many nice housing estates in Pudong New Area. Our Housing estate Rainbow Estate is one of them. You can see three blocks in the middle. There is a beautiful garden in front of Block 2.In the garden there is a fountain. There is a shop on the right of Block 1.A big playground lies on the left of Block 3. You can see many men, women, boys and girls having exercise there. There is a small kindergarten in our housing estate. It is convenient and comfortable for us to live in our housing estate. 點評：文章的結構與布局較合理，有一定的順序，層次分明。 （四）議論文及范文點評 議論文要有自己的觀點，要有論證過程，強調觀點。常用的句型如： 1. 論點 Computer is important. We must learn English well. Its very important for us to... In my opinion... 2. 論證過程常用一些銜接詞可使文章讀起來流暢，緊湊。如：Firstly...Secondly，Lastly ... Above all等 3．結尾強調觀點，最好用不同的句型來表達相同的觀點，如： So we must... So its very important for us to... I believe... We should... 范文1 Why Are Trees Important? Trees are very important to us. Do you know why? Let me tell you. Trees take in carbon dioxide from the air and make oxygen. Thats important. People and animals need oxygen to live. Many small animals and insects live in the trees. Some of them also get food from trees. Trees can also stop water and soil from going away. If we have a lot of trees, we stop deserts from being large. I think this is very important. You know, trees are green. They can make our country even more beautiful. Trees are our good friends. We should plant more trees and take good care of them. 點評：文章先闡明論點，接著論證，最后重申自己的觀點。 范文2 Its Our Duty To Protect Our Environment Its our duty to protect our environment. Where we live? The earth. The earth is the only one place we live in. So you know how important the environment is. But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground. Its terrible if we still do it. Now, its time for all the people in the society to protect the environment. Its our duty. It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment. We should make our environment more and more beautiful.

（五）應用文及范文點評 要了解掌握各種應用文的文體、格式、各種文體的常用語句。寫信時，發信人的地址和發信日期寫在信的右上角。信的左邊寫稱呼，如Dear+頭銜+姓或Dear+名Dear Tom, Dear Mr. White 信的正文一般分為幾個段落，結尾另起一行，寫With best wishes! 信的結束語一般用Yours, Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully... 日期寫法有月，日，年或日，月，年如2005年5月18日，May. 18, 2005 18 May, 2005 寫信常用的句子開頭有： I havent heard from you for a long time... Hows everything going with you? Im now writing to you. /I miss you so much. Thank you for your letter. I have received your letter. 結尾有： I hope I can see you soon. Give my best/warmest regards to.. Ill write to you soon. 初中寫信題目多為提供情景寫信，如2000年中考題目（根據所給情景寫封回信，至少50個單詞，要求內容切題，意思連貫。） Situation: Aihuas aunt is now in Australia. She went there ten years ago. In her letter she wants very much to know what Shanghai is like now. 又如2004年某省中考題目：根據美國朋友Bob來信的內容寫一篇英文回信。 范文1 Dear friend, Hello, Im your new friend. My name is Bob. Im fifteen. Im American. I live in New York. I am a middle school student. Im good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friend and I often sing pop songs together. After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I am learning Chinese. I hope l will visit your country one day. Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Bob 點評：仔細審題，了解Bob想知道你哪方面的情況，要有針對性地回信，注意寫回信的格式。 范文2 Dear Bob, Yesterday I heard from you. I am very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Peter Zhang. I am sixteen years old. I live in I am a middle school student, too. I like English and maths very much. I also like sports. I am good at singing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? Please write to me soon. Yours Peter Zhang 點評：回信語言簡潔，明了，句子間的銜接自然，緊湊，文中作者把自己的情況大致向美國朋友作了介紹，達到了寫回信的目的。 假如你陪你校的外籍教師Smith先生去音樂廳聽音樂，在門口的布告欄里看見一張觀眾須知，內容如下： 觀眾須知 1．一人一票，憑票入場； 2．場內嚴禁吸煙； 3．食品和飲料請勿帶進場內； 4．演出時請勿照相； 5．演出時請勿使用傳呼機和移動電話； 6．提前30分鐘入場。 Smith先生不懂中文，他很想知道布告欄里寫著什么。現在，請你把觀眾須知的內容用英語告訴Smith先生，并把要講的話寫下來。 范文3 Mr. Smith, it is a notice to the audience. It says that we should enter the concert hall 30 minutes earlier before the concert starts. Entrance to the hall is by ticket only, each one each ticket. As a rule, food or drink should not be taken into the hall. Of course, smoking is not allowed in the hall either. Please dont bring your digital camera with you because no photos can be taken during the concert. And what is more, beepers and mobile phones must be off during the concert. 點評：文章的用詞和句式有一定的難度，特別是關聯詞的運用，如of course, as a rule, and what is more使文章讀起來朗朗上口，層層緊扣，環環遞進，體現了作者較高的寫作技巧和水平。 點評：作者多用學過的詞語不但保證了正確，還鞏固了所學的知識，并且注意句型的多樣化，如長句，短句，疑問句，使用了if，so, now, but等詞，整篇文章讀起來朗朗上口。實際上，寫文章就像串珠子，連接詞就在于把一個個單詞串起來。（三）說明文及范文點評 說明文是就某一件事說明清楚，一般總是以空間順序展開的，可以自上而下，自左而右，從里到外，從整體到局部等等。寫物的文章常用某處有某物的句子表示物的存在。 常用的句型如： There be... I have got a/an... It is-red/green/colour/round... I likebest. It looks like... I like it very much. I will keep it for ever. 范文1 Our Language Lab There is a language lab in our school. Its on the third floor. Its big and clean. There are 50 desks and 50 chairs in it. There are 50 computers and a control desk（操縱臺）in it. There are50 headphones（耳機）on the desk. Every week we have our English lessons here. We watch slides, TV, video and listen to tapes. Then the teacher asks us questions. We like our language lab and always keep it clean and tidy. 點評：這篇文章寫了我們的語音室，按照一定的空間順序，先寫設備，再寫功能，讓人對語音室的概貌有一個全面，準確的了解。 范文2 Our Housing Estate There are many nice housing estates in Pudong New Area. Our Housing estate Rainbow Estate is one of them. You can see three blocks in the middle. There is a beautiful garden in front of Block 2.In the garden there is a fountain. There is a shop on the right of Block 1.A big playground lies on the left of Block 3. You can see many men, women, boys and girls having exercise there. There is a small kindergarten in our housing estate. It is convenient and comfortable for us to live in our housing estate. 點評：文章的結構與布局較合理，有一定的順序，層次分明。 （四）議論文及范文點評 議論文要有自己的觀點，要有論證過程，強調觀點。常用的句型如： 1. 論點 Computer is important. We must learn English well. Its very important for us to... In my opinion... 2. 論證過程常用一些銜接詞可使文章讀起來流暢，緊湊。如：Firstly...Secondly，Lastly ... Above all等 3．結尾強調觀點，最好用不同的句型來表達相同的觀點，如： So we must... So its very important for us to... I believe... We should... 范文1 Why Are Trees Important? Trees are very important to us. Do you know why? Let me tell you. Trees take in carbon dioxide from the air and make oxygen. Thats important. People and animals need oxygen to live. Many small animals and insects live in the trees. Some of them also get food from trees. Trees can also stop water and soil from going away. If we have a lot of trees, we stop deserts from being large. I think this is very important. You know, trees are green. They can make our country even more beautiful. Trees are our good friends. We should plant more trees and take good care of them. 點評：文章先闡明論點，接著論證，最后重申自己的觀點。 范文2 Its Our Duty To Protect Our Environment Its our duty to protect our environment. Where we live? The earth. The earth is the only one place we live in. So you know how important the environment is. But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground. Its terrible if we still do it. Now, its time for all the people in the society to protect the environment. Its our duty. It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment. We should make our environment more and more beautiful. 點評：作者多用學過的詞語不但保證了正確，還鞏固了所學的知識，并且注意句型的多樣化，如長句，短句，疑問句，使用了if，so, now, but等詞，整篇文章讀起來朗朗上口。實際上，寫文章就像串珠子，連接詞就在于把一個個單詞串起來。

（三）說明文及范文點評 說明文是就某一件事說明清楚，一般總是以空間順序展開的，可以自上而下，自左而右，從里到外，從整體到局部等等。寫物的文章常用某處有某物的句子表示物的存在。 常用的句型如： There be... I have got a/an... It is-red/green/colour/round... I likebest. It looks like... I like it very much. I will keep it for ever. 范文1 Our Language Lab There is a language lab in our school. Its on the third floor. Its big and clean. There are 50 desks and 50 chairs in it. There are 50 computers and a control desk（操縱臺）in it. There are50 headphones（耳機）on the desk. Every week we have our English lessons here. We watch slides, TV, video and listen to tapes. Then the teacher asks us questions. We like our language lab and always keep it clean and tidy. 點評：這篇文章寫了我們的語音室，按照一定的空間順序，先寫設備，再寫功能，讓人對語音室的概貌有一個全面，準確的了解。 范文2 Our Housing Estate There are many nice housing estates in Pudong New Area. Our Housing estate Rainbow Estate is one of them. You can see three blocks in the middle. There is a beautiful garden in front of Block 2.In the garden there is a fountain. There is a shop on the right of Block 1.A big playground lies on the left of Block 3. You can see many men, women, boys and girls having exercise there. There is a small kindergarten in our housing estate. It is convenient and comfortable for us to live in our housing estate. 點評：文章的結構與布局較合理，有一定的順序，層次分明。 （四）議論文及范文點評 議論文要有自己的觀點，要有論證過程，強調觀點。常用的句型如： 1. 論點 Computer is important. We must learn English well. Its very important for us to... In my opinion... 2. 論證過程常用一些銜接詞可使文章讀起來流暢，緊湊。如：Firstly...Secondly，Lastly ... Above all等 3．結尾強調觀點，最好用不同的句型來表達相同的觀點，如： So we must... So its very important for us to... I believe... We should... 范文1 Why Are Trees Important? Trees are very important to us. Do you know why? Let me tell you. Trees take in carbon dioxide from the air and make oxygen. Thats important. People and animals need oxygen to live. Many small animals and insects live in the trees. Some of them also get food from trees. Trees can also stop water and soil from going away. If we have a lot of trees, we stop deserts from being large. I think this is very important. You know, trees are green. They can make our country even more beautiful. Trees are our good friends. We should plant more trees and take good care of them. 點評：文章先闡明論點，接著論證，最后重申自己的觀點。 范文2 Its Our Duty To Protect Our Environment Its our duty to protect our environment. Where we live? The earth. The earth is the only one place we live in. So you know how important the environment is. But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground. Its terrible if we still do it. Now, its time for all the people in the society to protect the environment. Its our duty. It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment. We should make our environment more and more beautiful.

（五）應用文及范文點評 要了解掌握各種應用文的文體、格式、各種文體的常用語句。寫信時，發信人的地址和發信日期寫在信的右上角。信的左邊寫稱呼，如Dear+頭銜+姓或Dear+名Dear Tom, Dear Mr. White 信的正文一般分為幾個段落，結尾另起一行，寫With best wishes! 信的結束語一般用Yours, Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully... 日期寫法有月，日，年或日，月，年如2005年5月18日，May. 18, 2005 18 May, 2005 寫信常用的句子開頭有： I havent heard from you for a long time... Hows everything going with you? Im now writing to you. /I miss you so much. Thank you for your letter. I have received your letter. 結尾有： I hope I can see you soon. Give my best/warmest regards to.. Ill write to you soon. 初中寫信題目多為提供情景寫信，如2000年中考題目（根據所給情景寫封回信，至少50個單詞，要求內容切題，意思連貫。） Situation: Aihuas aunt is now in Australia. She went there ten years ago. In her letter she wants very much to know what Shanghai is like now. 又如2004年某省中考題目：根據美國朋友Bob來信的內容寫一篇英文回信。 范文1 Dear friend, Hello, Im your new friend. My name is Bob. Im fifteen. Im American. I live in New York. I am a middle school student. Im good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friend and I often sing pop songs together. After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I am learning Chinese. I hope l will visit your country one day. Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Bob 點評：仔細審題，了解Bob想知道你哪方面的情況，要有針對性地回信，注意寫回信的格式。 范文2 Dear Bob, Yesterday I heard from you. I am very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Peter Zhang. I am sixteen years old. I live in I am a middle school student, too. I like English and maths very much. I also like sports. I am good at singing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? Please write to me soon. Yours Peter Zhang 點評：回信語言簡潔，明了，句子間的銜接自然，緊湊，文中作者把自己的情況大致向美國朋友作了介紹，達到了寫回信的目的。 假如你陪你校的外籍教師Smith先生去音樂廳聽音樂，在門口的布告欄里看見一張觀眾須知，內容如下： 觀眾須知 1．一人一票，憑票入場； 2．場內嚴禁吸煙； 3．食品和飲料請勿帶進場內； 4．演出時請勿照相； 5．演出時請勿使用傳呼機和移動電話； 6．提前30分鐘入場。 Smith先生不懂中文，他很想知道布告欄里寫著什么。現在，請你把觀眾須知的內容用英語告訴Smith先生，并把要講的話寫下來。 范文3 Mr. Smith, it is a notice to the audience. It says that we should enter the concert hall 30 minutes earlier before the concert starts. Entrance to the hall is by ticket only, each one each ticket. As a rule, food or drink should not be taken into the hall. Of course, smoking is not allowed in the hall either. Please dont bring your digital camera with you because no photos can be taken during the concert. And what is more, beepers and mobile phones must be off during the concert. 點評：文章的用詞和句式有一定的難度，特別是關聯詞的運用，如of course, as a rule, and what is more使文章讀起來朗朗上口，層層緊扣，環環遞進，體現了作者較高的寫作技巧和水平。 點評：作者多用學過的詞語不但保證了正確，還鞏固了所學的知識，并且注意句型的多樣化，如長句，短句，疑問句，使用了if，so, now, but等詞，整篇文章讀起來朗朗上口。實際上，寫文章就像串珠子，連接詞就在于把一個個單詞串起來。（三）說明文及范文點評 說明文是就某一件事說明清楚，一般總是以空間順序展開的，可以自上而下，自左而右，從里到外，從整體到局部等等。寫物的文章常用某處有某物的句子表示物的存在。 常用的句型如： There be... I have got a/an... It is-red/green/colour/round... I likebest. It looks like... I like it very much. I will keep it for ever. 范文1 Our Language Lab There is a language lab in our school. Its on the third floor. Its big and clean. There are 50 desks and 50 chairs in it. There are 50 computers and a control desk（操縱臺）in it. There are50 headphones（耳機）on the desk. Every week we have our English lessons here. We watch slides, TV, video and listen to tapes. Then the teacher asks us questions. We like our language lab and always keep it clean and tidy. 點評：這篇文章寫了我們的語音室，按照一定的空間順序，先寫設備，再寫功能，讓人對語音室的概貌有一個全面，準確的了解。 范文2 Our Housing Estate There are many nice housing estates in Pudong New Area. Our Housing estate Rainbow Estate is one of them. You can see three blocks in the middle. There is a beautiful garden in front of Block 2.In the garden there is a fountain. There is a shop on the right of Block 1.A big playground lies on the left of Block 3. You can see many men, women, boys and girls having exercise there. There is a small kindergarten in our housing estate. It is convenient and comfortable for us to live in our housing estate. 點評：文章的結構與布局較合理，有一定的順序，層次分明。 （四）議論文及范文點評 議論文要有自己的觀點，要有論證過程，強調觀點。常用的句型如： 1. 論點 Computer is important. We must learn English well. Its very important for us to... In my opinion... 2. 論證過程常用一些銜接詞可使文章讀起來流暢，緊湊。如：Firstly...Secondly，Lastly ... Above all等 3．結尾強調觀點，最好用不同的句型來表達相同的觀點，如： So we must... So its very important for us to... I believe... We should... 范文1 Why Are Trees Important? Trees are very important to us. Do you know why? Let me tell you. Trees take in carbon dioxide from the air and make oxygen. Thats important. People and animals need oxygen to live. Many small animals and insects live in the trees. Some of them also get food from trees. Trees can also stop water and soil from going away. If we have a lot of trees, we stop deserts from being large. I think this is very important. You know, trees are green. They can make our country even more beautiful. Trees are our good friends. We should plant more trees and take good care of them. 點評：文章先闡明論點，接著論證，最后重申自己的觀點。 范文2 Its Our Duty To Protect Our Environment Its our duty to protect our environment. Where we live? The earth. The earth is the only one place we live in. So you know how important the environment is. But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground. Its terrible if we still do it. Now, its time for all the people in the society to protect the environment. Its our duty. It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment. We should make our environment more and more beautiful. 點評：作者多用學過的詞語不但保證了正確，還鞏固了所學的知識，并且注意句型的多樣化，如長句，短句，疑問句，使用了if，so, now, but等詞，整篇文章讀起來朗朗上口。實際上，寫文章就像串珠子，連接詞就在于把一個個單詞串起來。